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The sound of water falling into water
is like the rhythm of your breath,
a memory from lost nights
and a morning when your eyes
shone brighter than the sun.
The sound of water falling into water
soothes me just as the steady
beating of your heart in one moment
that will become an everlasting eternity.
The sound of water falling into water
resounds as the sound of your laughter
which seems to keep me alive through
the darkest nights, while your smile
rises and sets upon me.
The sound of water falling into water
carries the serenity of our love
speaking in ancient voices that
only lovers may hear in the music
that only we can create.
is like the rhythm of your breath,
a memory from lost nights
and a morning when your eyes
shone brighter than the sun.
The sound of water falling into water
soothes me just as the steady
beating of your heart in one moment
that will become an everlasting eternity.
The sound of water falling into water
resounds as the sound of your laughter
which seems to keep me alive through
the darkest nights, while your smile
rises and sets upon me.
The sound of water falling into water
carries the serenity of our love
speaking in ancient voices that
only lovers may hear in the music
that only we can create.
In a book I was reading there was this line
"the noise of water falling into water"
And there was something so poetic about that, I knew I needed to write a poem revolving around that phrase.
"the noise of water falling into water"
And there was something so poetic about that, I knew I needed to write a poem revolving around that phrase.
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love the images and tingling water-sounds i was seeing/hearing as i read this. the repetition really helped to reinforce it well ^_^