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Your lost winter eyes
penetrate into my soul
give me frozen death
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100 Themes Challenge

"Cold"

This poem is meant to have a double meaning. It is both a personification of winter, and a love story and perhaps more
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breathtaking, like winter-crisp air
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~SilverWynd Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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~xLeah7x Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Very lovely! Wonderful diction and simplicity. You have such a deep emotion behind such a few words.

Excellent work, I enjoyed reading this. =)
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~SilverWynd Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much, your comments are most appreciated
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~xLeah7x Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No, thank you, I enjoyed it. =)
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