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Is it possible
I am destined for the wrong kind of love?
What might await us,
If only you were as willing as I
to possibly lose it all,
I wish blindly to fall into you
I know in truth we may destroy each other beautifully,
but even that would be sweet.

The thought of you is relentless,
is a whisper of love worth the risk
of our death?

Only you can provide the answer,
we may come to damn each other,
but the moment I saw you I knew
I would readily be condemned
if only for a taste of you,
the touch of you.

You have already stole  
a part of me away
however unmeaning
and I know you would hate the thought,
count is as another of you sins
but I want you to give in
and let us fall to ruins if we must
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~Adonael Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Intense and there's a unrelenting tone in the poem generally speaking. Though I'm not too fond of poems that essentially sexualise romance (as my interpretation leads anyway), all the same, it is a very good example of a poem like that.
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*SilverWynd Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But essentially this poem as not in truth about romance, it is about a feeling of physical attraction and the wondering if it would be possible for something more to come from it. At root this is not a love poem, but a poem of conflicted feelings for an individual.
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~Adonael Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can see that now though a physical attraction can sometimes just lead to a sexual encounter. But I do see the amount of scope in this poem and it's nice to see.
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the last three lines of the first stanza <3
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:iconoldfootnote:
I have experienced something like thiis, last month, and it fell apart on the second day of the year. The lingering and residual pain of this is nearly unbearable.
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*SilverWynd Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am quite sorry to hear of your misfortune, that is the danger sometimes.
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:iconoldfootnote:
And now I have to get over her . . . one moment at a time . . .
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*SilverWynd Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, too many people like to dwell upon the past, or dwell on their own misery. But what is done is done, and life is still out there and it might be painful, but it certainly is survivable, and I believe all things happen for thier reasons, so who knows what is waiting around the next corner.
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Thanks for the encouragement. I guess it is a matter of perspective. From where I stand, there is little around the corner. Guess I will just have to be surprised.
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Mood: Love ~ithaswhatitisnt Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful! I think most people can relate, to that moment when you first see someone and you're just consumed by how powerful your feelings for them are. Well done! :clap:
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