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My love is a rose
of all thorns,  
a scentless flower,
all monochrome.

I am a stormy gray day,
of heavy clouds
impregnated
only with bleak misery,
ready to descend.

At rare moments
I might appear
sepia toned,
my love can be found
in all the old photographs,
yellowed around the edges,
smiles starting to fade,

I know I am a cracked vase,
of little use,
no longer a water bearing urn,
no more for holding
beautiful frivolities,
but gathering dust,
where spiders dwell.

A deteriorating fresco
my colors do not shine,
and I exude an atmosphere
of dungeon dampness,
with cold stone floors.

My love is an artifact
forgotten in attics,
while I gather mothballs
living only within shattered
memories and broken dreams.
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~Enemom Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is simply beautiful. The rose comparison is fabulously incredible. This is a poem that will go into my favorites.
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*SilverWynd Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much
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~Enemom Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
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~BelaRoseWolf Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
I really loved the symbolism and comparisons in your poem. Awesome work! ^^
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*SilverWynd Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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~BelaRoseWolf Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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*wizillusions Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:+fav:

Excellent writing with so many wonderful comparisons.

These I found most intriguing.

a scentless flower,
all monochrome.

of dungeon dampness,
with cold stone floors.
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*SilverWynd Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Mood: Obsessed ~Tributes13 Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Silver, can I like steal your brain *Gets knives out* because that ^ is FLIPPIN' AMAZING!!!!!!
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*SilverWynd Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha thank you, taking my brain is not recommended for your sanity.
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