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Galactic Love

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I crave
the full weight
of your velocity

steal my breath
in gasping
lungfuls

as atoms
smashed
together
our bodies yearn
to collide

you make
my love
nuclear

there are
mushroom clouds
blooming
within your eyes

and I watch
our skies
light up
the night
radioactive

I feel
a meltdown
overheated
come over
me

without
you
to cool me
back down

I will be
your super nova
propel you
out of this
stratosphere

our love
becomes
its own
galaxy

let me
fall away
into your
black hole.
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laststandingnapoleon's avatar
Dafaq...Nobody's left a comment?! This is utter bullcrap; this is a gorgeous poem!

I love stanzas 3&5. Both have a very compelling use of imagery. I could feel the love between the two of you- and it is as beautiful as the pillars of creation. :heart: